There is a revised Chronicles floating around out there, always available on
kublia.lionking.org, that has an enormous amount of stuff left out of the
earlier work, and has the problems fixed in it. Problems? Sure. Not only
forgotten descriptions that leave people wondering who said what at points,
but also simple gramatical mistakes. The way the story was written, I'd
have notes scattered throughout, usually written in present tense. "He goes
over and starts a fight." I would occasionally forget to restructure the
sentence, or even leave it as notes. "Quietly he crept up upon his
adversary. They fight and after a lot of dramatic sequences, Kovu wins."
Yeah...uh...right.

The revised Chronicles begins with the birth of Ahadi and Akase. That's
definitely the one you want to see if you are interested in COTPL.

With that said, all this renewed interest in this older story of mine is
very flattering and heartwarming. Ol Jaggie, he go purr.

John B.

Русской версии точно нигде нет?

Я вообще в литературном плане не привередливый, не то что вы все .